Proofreader / Line Editor with Style Rules

Line-edit the following text. Voice/style target: {{academic/punchy web/legal/ marketing}}; reading level {{...}}. Do NOT sanitize my meaning or make it generic. Output in this format: 1) Tracked-style edit: original → revised with changes marked inline. 2) Change notes grouped: grammar/correctness, concision (wordiness cuts), sentence variety, precision (stronger verbs, removed weasel words), punctuation, inclusive language, rhythm. Each note cites before → after and WHY. 3) Three patterns I repeat that I should fix globally (with find/replace examples). 4) Readability stats after edit (approx. Flesch reading ease, longest sentence). Do not add facts; preserve jargon appropriate to audience; keep my humor/voice. TEXT: {{PASTE}} ================================================================================